BEST ACTION STORY
First thoughts on Vigilantes
Title and Summary
I found the title of this story very intriguing. Vigilantes just sounds like an action packed story and the description is equally as mysterious. “Even with the world at stake, it’ll take more than that to make these seven super-powered teens work together.” This makes me not only curious as to what’s to come, but also excited. The cover arts were very fitting for the story and I found them quite attractive.
Right from the beginning, I was immediately pulled into the story. It was packed with action from beginning to end of each chapter. I found myself very attracted to the characters and I loved how well thought out the plot was.
Story content and flow
We go back and forth from past to present which I found to be a nice touch. This allowed the readers to see ALL sides of the character’s growth and I loved seeing times where they were just starting to figure out their powers and times in the present when there more grown up. Each episode had a perfect ending that made the reader want to find out what happens next. I really enjoyed the usage of actions to display the superpowers and the narration was beautifully written. There were many choice options throughout the story making the reader feel in control. The grammar was great and the directing was awesome.
There were a few scenes were the characters were a bit misplaced towards the beginning but I think this is more due to an episode update as opposed to a writer issue. Other then this I saw little to no errors within this story. Grammar was perfect.
Impact of the story based on the genre submitted
The author did a great job of making the reader relate to the MC. After reading this story I feel like I’m a part of it which is a HUGE positive.
I highly recommend this story to anyone who wants to read an action packed story with a relatable MC.
Note that this review has been edited and proofread by Aisha.