BEST HORROR STORY
First thoughts on Don't Sleep
Title and Summary
The first thing we noticed about this story was the amazing cover art. Both the large and small cover seemed very fitting for the story. After reading the description, we were intrigued to say the least. The summary was well written and gave off just the right amount of information to make you want to read more. I also found the title very fitting for the story.
The plot was very well thought out and kept the reader on their toes. The author provided us with the perfect amount of background information on each character which we really enjoyed. There was never a dull moment within the plot. Although we do think some aspects were a bit predictable, the twists were amazing and kept us hooked.
Story content and flow
Each episode was packed with perfect spot directing, great grammar, and creepy cliffhangers which leave you wanting to read more. The freaky ghosts were created by making characters without faces which we found very unique. We loved that the choice options had an effect on the storyline.
The only negative thing we can say about this story is that some of the backgrounds appear blurry, particularly the creepier ones. There were few to no errors within this story.
Impact of the story based on the genre submitted
This story definitely had the “scary movie” feel to it. It keeps you on your toes and makes you expect the unexpected which is a great quality for a horror story to have.
We would highly recommend this story to anyone who wants to read a scary story. You won’t be disappointed with the creepy ghosts and cliffhangers.
Note that this review has been edited and proofread by Aisha.